Question:如果你有絕對的能力改變生活中的一件事，你最想改變的是什麼。請以”What I Want To Change the Most in My Life Is…“為題陳述你最想改變的事。 綠色佳 語意修正的很好，很快就進入狀況，字數也夠，第三段的結論很漂亮，有創意，而且重點是符合題目的要求，又有完整呼應自己前面所提內容, nice: 16分 What I Want To Change the Most in My Life Is Being stuck in the traffic jam on the way to s …
學生作文(8分的範例與原因)
本篇為學生所寫的三格看圖作文(北區模考)，大致是一家人騎腳踏車， 然後請路人幫忙拍全家合照，結果不小心失足跌入水裡。 <此篇為普雷老師通常首次為學生批改的大致方式> This vacation[MSOffice1] ,I went to the famous mountain of[MSOffice2] Japan which have[MSOffice3] cleaned[MSOffice4] water and fresh air alone[MSOffice5] and re …
雄中–黃杞智(humor–16分)
The Importance of a Sense of Humor Some people take everything seriously. As a result, they may lack lots of laughter in their life. Others, however, are humorous. They alw …
普雷的近況
近日因為普雷媽的腿，出車禍被撞斷開刀，所以我常需陪伴 她作復健，話說回來，今天陪她到長庚複診，聽到醫生跟她說: 妳的腿開刀後，這樣的復原情形算很好很快了唷， 我的兩顆眼淚竟然不爭氣地跑出來。 anyway，最近是典型的內憂外患，補習班的新學期開課戰爭也即將展開 所以如果作文批改有所delay，也請大家多包涵，good luck for everyone cest la vie ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
100年學測–看圖作文化妝舞會18分的範文
範文修改(94學測-課堂打瞌睡作文)–北一女學姐<謝珮珮>
本篇得分: 16/20 <這是之前念北一女的學姐: 謝珮珮所寫的作文， 她已經考上台大法律系> In the English class last week, Peter did so embarrassing a thing that he could never forget.[e1] It was a winter afternoon; the sun did not show i …
作文範文原稿(94學測-課堂打瞌睡作文)–北一女<謝珮珮>
In the English class last week, Peter did so embarrassing a thing that he could never forget. It was a winter afternoon; the sun did not show itself all day, and the cold breeze was blowing. In fact, it was a good time for a nap. As the teacher …
An experience of sickness (一次生病的經驗) 12分
高二陳奕安 An experience of sickness 未修改版 12分 I was so ill in hospital that I did not believe I could ever live through my hospital days. The thought f that experience still chills me …
98年指考 <閱讀測驗答案>
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名詞亦可修飾名詞 why?
很多同學從國中的觀念都是adj. 才能修飾名詞，但事實上早在國中時，就有出現名詞修飾名詞的情況 只是例子不多，但到了高中，則是很多不勝舉，以下是講解的例子: convenience store 強調的是商店 “本身的性質 ” 是指專門帶給人 “便利(convenience)” 的那種超商 ， 再看以下進一步解釋: 請先記得: <convenience n. 便利 &n …