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請看以下相關報導，就知道我之前教你們寫作文的注意事項 為何是這樣的依據了 學測指考 閱卷問題知多少 2011-06-07 中國時報 【余綺芳】 。（作者為東吳大學語言教學中心副教授）       　七月初又要大學指考，試後即展開閱卷工作，筆者近幾年參與學測與指考英文測驗評分，有些意見想一吐為快。     　如何決定閱卷人員的機制與閱卷品質息息相關。我記得多年前是由各大專院校教師有意願者自行報名，後來因為這樣做法沒有任何篩選，閱卷品質良莠不齊，因而改變由大考中心在有限的重點大學各找一名組長，由組長招兵買馬， …

本篇是roger同學，rewrite五次後的成果 請欣賞囉   An Experience of Going to See a Doctor         As aged 15, I often suffered from chest pain for no particular reason. At first, I didn’t think it was a big deal. Later on, the pain struck more frequently and sharply. Whene …

Roger:  13分 內容與用字大多有程度，但結論不夠貼切題目的要求    你一定吃虧或上當受騙過吧，把它寫下來。第一段（約60字）寫事情發生的時間、經過、地點。第二段（約60字）寫你對這件事情的看法或感想。             The incident took place when I was fourteen[MSOffice1] . One day, I was packing my bag, ready to go home after a …

Question:如果你有絕對的能力改變生活中的一件事，你最想改變的是什麼。請以”What I Want To Change the Most in My Life Is…“為題陳述你最想改變的事。 綠色佳 語意修正的很好，很快就進入狀況，字數也夠，第三段的結論很漂亮，有創意，而且重點是符合題目的要求，又有完整呼應自己前面所提內容,  nice: 16分  What I Want To Change the Most in My Life Is Being stuck in the traffic jam on the way to s …

    本篇為學生所寫的三格看圖作文(北區模考)，大致是一家人騎腳踏車， 然後請路人幫忙拍全家合照，結果不小心失足跌入水裡。 <此篇為普雷老師通常首次為學生批改的大致方式>   This vacation[MSOffice1]  ,I went to the famous mountain of[MSOffice2]  Japan which have[MSOffice3]  cleaned[MSOffice4]  water and fresh air alone[MSOffice5]  and re …

    The Importance of a Sense of Humor                   Some people take everything seriously. As a result, they  may lack lots of laughter in their life. Others, however, are humorous. They alw …

  本篇得分: 16/20     <這是之前念北一女的學姐: 謝珮珮所寫的作文，       她已經考上台大法律系>       In the English class last week, Peter did so embarrassing a thing that he could never forget.[e1]  It was a winter afternoon; the sun did not show i …

           In the English class last week, Peter did so embarrassing a thing that he could never forget. It was a winter afternoon; the sun did not show itself all day, and the cold breeze was blowing. In fact, it was a good time for a nap. As the teacher …