高二陳奕安    An experience of sickness 未修改版        12分

         I was so ill in hospital that I did not believe I could ever live through my hospital days.  The thought f that experience still chills me.  It was on a hot afternoon that the terrible accident happened.  I was five years old, a naughty and curious girl and I went to a nearby construction site to look for something in the debris. 

         Just as I was digging, a big and thick brick crashed on my head.  I fell down and immediately lost consciousness.  The next thing I knew was that I was lying in a ward.  My mom was beside me, wiping tears on her face.  She told me I just had an operation on my head to save my life.

         After three months of treatment, I regained my health, but the accident has lift a scar if not a scar in my heart.