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          The incident took place when I was fourteen[MSOffice1] . One day, I was packing my bag, ready to go home after a stressful day at school. Suddenly someone shouted my name and said that my homeroom teacher wanted me at his office. I put my bag back on my desk, and walked to the teacher’s office in my normal pace, but when I reached the office, the door was locked and the lights are[MSOffice2]  out. I realized that I was tricked and rushed back to my classroom with my heart filled with fury. When I reached the front door of the classroom, I was about to went banana, but the scene presented in front of me was so shocking that I became speechless. My bag was torn apart and my text books and pencils were littered[MSOffice3]  around my seat. As I picked them up and put them in order, I found my wallet missing. I went home with my pencil box, since I got nothing to carry my books, so I left them in my drawer. I called my homeroom teacher as soon as I got home. The next day, the student who stole my wallet apologized to me, said that he needed money for the arcade, and my homeroom teacher want[MSOffice4]  me to keep my mouth shut, since the school don’t [MSOffice5] want it on the news headline because the student’s father was a famous politician.

          I was young and ignorant, and I don’t know any other way[MSOffice6]  to settle this, but if the incident happened in my high school life, that student wouldn’t get off the hook so easy.[MSOffice7]  I think children from special families should be treated equally with other kids. Although the world isn’t fair, we [MSOffice8] can do our best to make the world a fair place for all.