99指考難忘味道

以下文章為 “軟”英文今年(明天)高三應考生 作文範文 分數 18左右

已徵得學生同意放上來這裡給考生參考 但其他人請勿引用

另外這是第三次rewrite的結果 抱歉無法把最終版第四次(真正的18分)

的文章給大家看 畢竟他也是明天的考生 所以稍微幫他保留一些實力

我們的學生作文 都是同一個題目至少來回寫過三次以上 不斷與我討論

最後才會定稿

即便到今天早上 即便上週早已停課

我也是主動給他們自由來找我批改與討論英文作文

幾位超認真的學生 也都拼命問 拼命修作文

我只能說 英文作文 沒有極限 要拚出高下

 

只有 練習–>與老師批改討論 不斷反覆來回 才有機會

祝福各位考生 後天英文考科 隨心所欲 下筆行雲流水

Where there is a will, there is a way!

A gust of wind was howling outside. Meanwhile, inside the house,

I was having an intensive argument with my mother. Because of my coming

home late, she was indignant about it. Then, I revolted against her, for I

considered that she overcared me. All of a sudden, she slapped me across

the face for my rudeness. Without hesitation, I dashed out of my house

with eyes brimming. Plodding along the streets, I didn’t know where to go;

meanwhile, it began to drizzle. The rain came pouring down with a loud

crash of thunder. In order to avoid being drenched, I found a pavilion

as a temporary shelter. I squatted in it, regretting the previous

reckless deed I had done to my mother. Like an immature and heart-broken

child, I had no choice but to burst into tears.

Out of a blue, someone clapped me on the back. Then I turned back

to see who was there. On seeing her, I stood rooted to the spot, and my

pulse quickened as a mixture of shock and astonishment built in my chest.

She was my dear mother! Not until I got home with her did I spot that

she was drenched all her body, including her curly hair and exquisite

clothes. Instead of reproaching me, she walked up to the kichen and

cooked some food. After a short period of time, a familiar smell

caught my nostrils’ attention. My mother then passed a bowl of noodles

to me. The scent wafting from the noodles really warmed my heart.

The moment I smelled it, I felt so comfortable and toasty, gorging it

immediately. Tears of joy started to dribble into

the soup, and I did know that was mother’s smell.

Even now, my mother’s smell usually pervades in my mind.

I think the best smell on earth is not fragrance or perfume.

The mother’s smell which can warm me when I am in need is the best

smell. Although it is not the most good-smelling, it has been the

most euphoric smell to me.